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Wednesday, 27 September 2017

speeches

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6biS4uzovkk&feature=em-upload_owner



https://youtu.be/6biS4uzovkk

EVEL 2
Students will:
Purposes and audiences L2 ( OI: I can use simple text structures that suit the purpose)
– constructs texts that demonstrate a growing awareness of audience and purpose through appropriate choice of content, language, and text form;
Ideas L2 ( GI: I can include a range of relevant information and experiences, I can support my main points with details and or comments)
– forms and expresses ideas and information with reasonable clarity, often drawing on personal experience and knowledge;

LEVEL 3
Students will:
Purposes and audiences L3 (OI: I can use a text type to suit purpose)
– constructs texts that show a growing awareness of purpose and audience through careful choice of content, language, and text form;
Ideas L3 (GI: I can include a range of relevant information or experiences in my writing, I can stick to the topic when I add detail to my writing)
– forms and expresses ideas and information with increased clarity, drawing on a range of sources;
LEVEL 4
Students will:
Purposes and audiences L4 (OI: I can understand my purposes for writing and how to achieve these purposes)
– constructs texts that show an awareness of purpose and audience through deliberate choice of content, language, and text form;
Ideas L4 (GI: I can use my research skills to find and record the information needed for my writing, I can create content that is concise and relevant to the curriculum task)
– forms and communicates ideas and information clearly, drawing on a range of sources;


WHAT WAS MY SPEECH TOPIC: Jimmy butler [nba all star]



HOW DID I GO WITH MY RESEARCH?really well because there was heaps of research and i filled out heaps of q cards



WHAT DID I DO WELL WITH MY SPEECH PRESENTATION?really well something i need to work on is to look at the audience



WHAT DO COULD I IMPROVE ON WITH MY SPEECH PRESENTATION?look at the audience

2 comments:

  1. Max, I was really impressed with your speech. You added so much detail and included personal detail about why Jimmy Butler is inspiring. Your next step is to make sure you look up from your cue cards more to engage with your audience. (also would be awesome if you could upload your video!)

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  2. thank you i will try to upload my video next time and look up

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