imaginary friend blog post

Writing Sample 2 - Imaginary Friend Story

What were the writing goals that you were trying to achieve in this piece of writing?

First up we had to create a hook to get the reader involved and want to carry on and read it.

then we had to remember one time we made up mischief and blamed it on our imaginary friend and write about that.

What are you proud of about this piece of writing?

I am very proud of the way I used heaps of verbs, nouns, and all sorts like that and even describing words.Because I like the way I attracted some readers to read my amazing narrative with these awesome words.

What writing skills or features would improve your writing?

More punctuation e.g explanation marks and question marks apostrophes and all stuff like that I will also like to add more of my senses.

RECORD YOURSELF READING YOUR STORY AND INSERT THE VIDEO OF THIS